I like to read Mr.Putter and Tabby stories to my baby girl.
The book is about Mr. putter and Tabby.It was fall when Mr.Putter and Tabby went to the backyard and Mr.Putter has a apple tree and pear tree.He dream about pear jelly.He loved that,but it was a problem because He can't go up ladder to cut the pears and He was a little sad.Then he thought about the slingshots when he was a boy he had one.so he made it and then Mr.putter and tabby went back again to the backyard and then he put the apples in the slingshot.But he couldn't hit any pear.but all apples he threw away was it in the Mrs.Teaberry front yard.But Mr.Putter doesn't know,and the next morning Mrs.Teaberry brought a big basket with apple pies,turnovers,apple jellies and a gallon of hot apple cider.so they were so Happy.
I am so glad that you share these stories with your daughter!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great summary - your writing is improving. Be careful about capital letters: Tabby needs a large T ands a small h unless it is the beginning of the sentence.
A couple of other changes:
to cut the pears - to pick the pears
but he couldn't shot - he couldn't hit